4.8.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] collapse and gash themselves [...]" → "[...] collapse and harm themselves [...]"
24.7.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"Contrive all reconciliation to suffer one amidst another’s impossibilities: By which derangement shall this elapse? Two strangers stand opposite a frame laid due of notion to grant mutual overture, when by the dwelling of either force or substance in matter commences upon self-sacrifices necessitated, accumulated, propounding withal, however forcibly wrought and never to cease answering reconciliations prior — suppose one of these figures assumes a query and a request for the other to follow upon a given object by a martyr’s great dedication in eve, that per course of charm a sympathizer acts both the flare and fire, another object is derived, two more are now hurled, replicated again, conceits in the aftermath are never truncated, warning that tyranny, tyranny, tyranny shall dare be bolstered with such an object nebulous and the latter’s response endeavours this dichotomy? Here may you find our paradox! Tangles of variables and more and more to administer a decision by passage: come herald for previous experiences with assault; faith once embedded, now stolen, trodden towards a mire; then a greater cruelty than these in the rejection of all rights; and for us, should you speak again, a furtive hypocritical brace of errors lies where gathered heaps of tangles traipse forward by the hand coaxing boundless unto chambers deep below. Whither she demarcate remembrance of voice amidst supplicants nary yearned for company, lest a scream chimes its weeping far across dusks long faltered by the medium unto collection she knew well to thread with paranoia, whispering, would that her companionship bless a threnody for greater violence — how is it, then, a decision could ever amount? A voluptuary of belief would bloody the heads of those she deems to sacrifice along the continuous ransacking of her own character, and yet—! This acknowledgement remains a precious constant! What a lovely embellishment we may outline; we have understood it thus from the moment of first interaction: the resplendence in crafting a whole to be kept embraced, how terribly life-giving the result, without concern, not for rank, even spiteful, however the agony marred and our belligerents would molest more by right, that dread be held in raiment so wilfully torn upon the distaff high on weaving a strung brilliance she might perhaps surge wondrous to discover herself hurtling down with strength of throat; care for your blood, madam, ere operants ignited as you observe hereafter the heap accrued. Paradoxes piled atop paradoxes abound in cogitation, sundered here, thrown thence to the waysides, so ruminous as to each tremble together in a frail mass of recklessness — thus is the cycle revolved with blisters and sutured in anew. How fiercely they find us, oh, how desperately they grasp! The cacophony beckons — to renounce hereafter would this conflict be lost of all anchors, reference, malleability per flesh soever stroked and licked by casts of wrought delicate fingers; an additional factor contends alongside: the individual compelled in her entirety to extremes, that lust might steal contempt, and they would ravish one another. Should these bulwarks, kept so dear to us, proffer our indulgence, yet are altogether relinquished, what of the beauty to be sourced from those dream-deep planes? Idolize a heart and its ordnance and a droplet’s surging ecstasy to make crude our relations, diffuse even a name in memory, smother the faces away, so comes the tally of man’s provenance to hold nearer and nearer beside a laughing gouged womb, none ablated by the value of cornerstone and mete alike— there remains only to shield close these ideals from those of assailants. No, no: Be rid of reconciliation, moreover, for our times crown the clash of flesh-flaying and gunfire. Forsake yourself now upon losses through unto any lack of meaning you must hold lest you collapse again as a newfound wailer whom all would abuse at a truant soldier’s instant; forget every fear in lieu of much the restless, forget hope! Here is a new world unbeknownst to you, my good madam! How many of these universes have we come across in our young lives? To what ends will we fight one another and save one another? A statistic of strangers lies before each one of us; a decrepit lot we shall be to drown oneself, to harm skin and flesh, or ornament our hands in embrace abound so strangely where might another grandeur sew it thus; here is brought the waxing of our apparatus. How wonderful everything is! The warmth beats and aches anxious to peer across the fields and imagine a wisp might run endlessly across its sunburned breadth, twirling through those other wild marching spectres; all of them, all of them caught in a glimpse upon their own trails at innumerable encounters along the theatre. Samantha was she called. There had she woken: Samantha Halley, a young woman of twenty, standing now across another young woman who had met with her minutes ago." → "Contrive all reconciliation to suffer against another impossibility;  may it elapse by what derangement shall befall a beloved stranger. Promises lament in force and substance ere reviled of unknowns ill, for when overture commences flame, thus the supplicant her mutual: upon self-sacrifices necessitated, accumulated, propounding withal, appeased to subside, extinguished amidst unknowns more, however forcibly wrought and never to cease answering reconciliations prior — suppose either exhorts her martyr pursue the eve of eve’s greatest object, would a dedication throb in want of heat, per tongue another objective be derived; yet two more rend the parasite by raw pulsing wound and are again hurled virulent from whence conceit never truncates after crippled bow, so must only an aria warn that tyranny, tyranny, tyranny cauterizes the object of its solstice, or even a dichotomy of its endeavour? She may very well gladden herself to dream and sing as stagnant rotting fevers bestow the smog its vilest sustenance, and here may you find our paradox! Tangles of variables and more and more to spew a fire by incision: come herald the asterism for prior experience with assault; faith once embedded, now stolen, trodden towards a mire; then a cruelty greater than these in the rejection of all rights; and should any of these pure women retch again, would thence they traipse that furtive manifold and coax more scum by hand, soever with warmth, those errors infesting from starscape forward unto the chambers deep below where never a mote is stifled, but incensed yet to combust. Even phosphorus shall flourish by the prettiest machination whither she demarcate voice from touch nary yearned for in company, this devoid of heat, lest a scream chimes its sorrow far across, and peradventure, these nameless dusks be long faltered of recollection and thread ceremony here on with paranoia, whispers, insults, conflict, each blessing this companionship for bleak vitriol — how is it, then, that good will ever amount? A voluptuary decapitates an innocent head to the ode of gasp and fume, and yet—! This possession remains a precious constant! What a lovely embellishment she may outline. We have understood it thus from first instance, the resplendence of forging a whole, to keep it due embraced, and how terribly life-giving the result with neither concern for rank nor exposure, even spiteful, however the agony marred, our belligerents molesting more by right, that raiment be torn so wilfully strung upon her fellow distaff to weave down wondrous her iridescent dread with strength of throat; care for your own blood in turn, madam, and know these operants ignite once you observe the heap accrued. Paradoxes pile atop paradoxes and are burned in assessment, sundered afterwards, soldered anon, violating the cynosure withal to wayside diorama upon null, by vacuum, naught else afire but brackets contrariwise, faulting once the momentum to reckon twice these vessels distended that they rapturously abrade, for though blisters swell by latitudinal bereavement, they, too, err in composition as either hemisphere anoints the cry of nature; would hence a blessing attend with sutures and molten iron alone, over and across and adjacent and on and on as the mass again ruminates for signal — again our cycle revolves. How fiercely they find us, oh, how desperately they grasp! The cacophony beckons us: Renounce this hereafter, and our conflict shall be lost of all anchors, reference, malleability per nerve soever stroked and licked by casts of wrought delicate fingers; but contend alongside, now, strike your dearest, and observe her compelled to extremes! Perhaps lust will thieve contempt, and perhaps both would then ravish one another. Should these darling bulwarks proffer indulgence, yet are altogether relinquished, what then the beauty to be sourced from those dream-deep planes? Idolize a heart and its ordnance and a capillary’s surging mania to make crude our relations, diffuse even a name in memory, smother the faces away, tally this of man’s provenance nearer and nearer beside a laughing gouged womb and ablate none by the virtue of cornerstone and mete adjoined — there remains only to shield close these ideals from assailants. No, no: Be rid of reconciliation, moreover, for our times crown the clash of flesh-flaying and gunfire. Forsake yourself now upon losses through unto any lack of meaning you must hold lest you collapse again, a newfound wailer whom all would abuse at a truant soldier’s instant; forget every fear in lieu of much the restless, forget hope! Here is a new world unbeknownst to you, my good madam! How many of these universes have we come across in our young lives? To what ends will we fight one another and save one another? A statistic of strangers lies before each of us; decrepit are we to drown our very lungs, to harm skin and flesh, or ornament our hands abound so strangely, where might another grandeur sew it thus. Here is brought the waxing of our apparatus, and oh, how wonderful everything is! The star beats and aches, anxious to peer across the fields, and imagine a wisp might run endlessly across its sunburned breadth, twirling through those other wild marching spectres, all of them, all of them upon their very trails, at innumerable encounters along the theatre. Samantha was she called. There had she woken: Samantha Halley, a young woman of twenty, standing now across another young woman who had met with her minutes ago."

Ch. 2
"Oh, hush, [...]" → "Ai, hush, [...]"
"[...] I’m up north of the country, the northeast." → "[...] I’m up north of the country, the northeast, Liao."
"[...] as she slowly inclined her head towards Aluhruna even in anticipation of Tsui’s response." → "[...] as she slowly inclined her head towards Aluhruna, nonetheless anticipating Tsui’s response."
19.7.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"Too much of its there’s been [...]" → "Too much of it there’s been [...]"
"I can remember a thing [...]" → "I can’t remember a thing [...]"
18.7.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
[Rewrote the intro, the succeeding version of which may be found in the listing under July 24, 2026.]
"[...] “you’re standing there with such beauty, Samantha. You have yet to act a bright, glowing screen — put down for us what you know, darling, trace again your passions; we would much like to see…” May exigency importune tempest and its mistress for courteous glance however intimated the fetters; in these matters ought not an audience bow a moment! Samantha would refrain now from that sanctified curtsey, of fright [...]" → "[...] “you are standing there with such beauty, Samantha. You have yet to fuse a-screen, that bright, glowing screen — put down for us what you know, darling, trace again your passions; we would much like to see…” May exigency importune tempest and its mistress for courteous glance however intimated the fetters; in these matters ought not an audience bow a moment! Samantha would refrain now from that sanctified curtsey: Of fright [...]"

Ch. 2
"Aluhruna looked to Tsui, who shook her head. “No, we won’t. Well, [...]" → "Aluhruna looked at Tsui, who shook her head. Both women seemed beset by a sudden physical discomfort. “No, we won’t.” Tsui said. “Well, [...]"
27.5.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] dreamland; and Tsui’s neck [...]" → "[...] dreamland and Tsui’s neck [...]"
"She would have curtsied in place before the maimed women, laughed at this regard, soever inhumed, torn through with great furor and mutilated them, lacerated the poor cripples, never to be bled herself; would raid in defiance against the auguries opposed these fevers." → "She would have curtsied in place to laugh before the maimed women soever inhumed, and mutilated them through with great furor, lacerated the poor cripples rank and torn with naught declaimed of her own blood but to raid in defiance against the auguries opposing these fevers."
"[...] shielding skin away as each peculiarity requires. The contemptibility of man is, [...]" → "[...] shielding skin away as each of those awful blights require. All of man’s failures, to my best assumption, are accompanied by hateful beauty, [...]"
"[...] but no impulse could stand as true poisoned [...]" → "[...] but impulse ill stands as true poisoned [...]"
24.5.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] you would see upon us strictures I have placed!" → "[...] see upon us, strictures I have placed!"
"[...] votives importune someone be wounded [...]" → "[...] votive songs importune someone be wounded [...]"
"[...] readily I would sacrifice a figurehead to attest these blessings." → "[...] a figurehead I readily hope to sacrifice to attest these blessings."
"[...] with even greater disgust would I lie to myself if I were to forget how potent the course of love may cause my impositions; if you would, I ask you both [...]" → "[...] with even greater disgust, to myself I would lie if I were to forget how potent then the course of love that causes my impositions; I ask you both [...]"
21.5.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] walk along the path to our communication areas [...]" → "[...] walk along the path to our communications area [...]"

Ch. 2
"[...] edificial source to meridian submissive [...]" → "[...] edificial source to antipodal submissive [...]"
19.5.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] though what puzzlement there had prior fallen [...]" → "[...] though what puzzlement prior fallen [...]"
"[...] Madam Halley,” she turned her head to the door [...]" → "[...] Madam Halley,” — she turned her head to the door [...]"

Ch. 2
ADDED → "That trim of yours is too plain for silk; your metal necklace is too bulky with those bracelets; there’s not a single design I can call interesting, the way I see it—!"
"[...] but as Aluhruna took to her feet and fixed down her dress, [...]" → "[...] but as Aluhruna took to her feet, adjusted her belt, and fixed down her dress, [...]"
"[...] so, too, did she follow in this manner, switching off the lamp as they pressed on their way." → "[...] so, too, did she follow in this manner and brush down irascibly at the silk lengths of her own skirt, switching off the lamp as they pressed on their way."
ADDED → "She was tracing the high collar of her apparel with a finger."
ADDED → "Her dress flowed behind with vigour far exceeding the hallway curtains."
"[...] sured with bewilderment." → "[...] surged with bewilderment, and after noticing faint silver inlaid in the leather construction of her belt, so studied her jewellery again, this time with careful scrutiny. They were all made of gold: her necklace was more a choker than she had initially assumed and wreathed around her neck in firm fashion, braiding about its form by the structure of numerous paired beads in lining. The loop, however, was not closed, instead capped on either end by round pedestal buffers with embossed decoration, that when Samantha leaned slightly closer, the moonlight caught upon swirling patterns in relief, and she thought suddenly of petals. Aluhruna’s bracelets and brooches were styled with similar designs — the latter attachments smithed more akin to pronged leaves — though these were slighter in craft; none lain so heavily on the woman’s frame as had the necklace."
ADDED → "It seemed more and more evident she was not wearing anything underneath her linen dress."
"[...] in the midst of these words, Samantha felt a a prominent scraping inside her flesh and skin [...]" → "[...] in the midst of these words, Samantha was seized by a prominent scraping inside her flesh and skin [...]"
"[...] in a trice perceived she could not but curtail so [...]" → "[...] in a trice felt she could not but curtail so [...]"
"[...] examine them with greater study. “You’d… think it best like a telephone, [...]" → "[...] examine Tsui with greater study. Her Chinese dress was red, deeply hued, almost maroon, embellished with even darker shades only wherever simple stemmed flowers had been woven in a spaced pattern throughout. It bore full sleeves and clung well-cuffed around the woman’s wrists, but the rest of its structure did not fit entirely to form, for the fabric had draped down and down past any distinguishable waistline far until the hem had flared split by her knees. Her thin calves were displayed with every headway stride the woman took en route — and yet, though the resulting visage was quite removed in intricacy compared with all else in build or curation that evening, proved thence by this quality the least confusing, and Samantha resumed, “You’d… think it best like a telephone, [...]"
"There was someone crying out above the storm: Someone whispered these stories close by the static and signalled aloud, [...]" → "There was someone sent to the storm, someone who had whispered these stories close and signalled aloud, [...]"
"Now— Now, little—" → "Now— Now, little dear—"
"[...] who on her own behalf tempered her disposition, proceeded up and converged nearer." → "[...] who on her own behalf tempered herself, proceeded up, and converged nearer."
20.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] sculptures [...]" → "[...] sculpturess [...]"
 what the FUCK was this typo
18.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] and you both would agree with me, I’m sure, to well work our approbant in dredging a sculpturess, not a sculptress, of her superficiality [...]" → "[...] and I’m sure you both would agree with me to well work our approbant in dredging a sculptures of her superficiality, not a sculptress [...]"
"[...] light graze upon her fingers [...]" → "[...] light graze on her fingers [...]"
"[...] segmented at random upon all collective length [...]" → "[...] segmented at random along its collective length  [...]"
"[...] cast across from elsewhere [...]" → "[...] cast over from elsewhere [...]"
"[...] along its sides [...]" → "[...] along the passage [...]"
"[...] similar to those within the passage [...]" → "[...] similar to those inside [...]"
"[...] had been the one to beckon her forth [...]" → "[...] had been the one to beckon her forward [...]"
17.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] sculpturess of her superficiality [...]" → "[...] sculpturess, not a sculptress, of her superficiality [...]"
"Samantha at once fell remorseful, yet by a tenderness of pain pursued with insistence and beckoned them both by means of solemnity, though roughshod had it been assumed with her final query." → "Samantha at once felt remorse, but pain pursued her solemnity more to roughshod imposal and she beckoned their means withal must follow her query, insisting either of them allay the tenderness of her bruises and cuts."
12.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] some anticipation of aid [...]" → "[...] some fluster of aid [...]"

Ch. 2
"Thank goodness I wasn’t shot in there." → "Gratefully more I thank not to have been shot in there."
9.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] afterwards staring [...]" → "[...] staring afterwards [...]"
"[...] which one of them was to reply [...]" → "[...] which one of them were to reply [...]"
"[...] priming divers words or perhaps a laugh [...]" → "[...] priming divers words, or maybe a laugh [...]"
"[...] straightened themselves [...]" → "[...] straightened themselves to firm stature [...]"
"For consideration, there was anchored by her thoughts another bracket implicating speech to continue [...]" → "There was anchored by her thoughts another bracket implicating speech to continue for consideration [...]"
"[...] towards this new company for all impressions made and all impressions developing [...]" → "[...] towards this new company and all impressions made and all impressions developing [...]"
"[...] implement. Purpose these, conformed as they would; even taken separate, [...]" → "[...] implement; take these separate as would they conform [...]"
"[...] in ossified’s stead, but by [...]" → "[...] in ossified’s stead — but by [...]"
"[...] acknowledge its chassis. In this framework [...]" → "[...] acknowledge its chassis, and due this framework [...]"
"[...] she thought, and — chance of chances — could neither  [...]" → "[...] she thought — chance of chances could neither [...]"
"[...] attenuate her grant towards those involved, thus by this sympathy relinquish her freedoms of extremism [...]" → "[...] attenuate her grant and relinquish her freedoms of extremism by this sympathy [...]"
"[...] transience here enclosed.  Souls are comported  [...]" → "[...] transience here enclosed, for souls are comported  [...]"
"[...] even less for its denouement, [...]" → "[...] even less towards its denouement; [...]"
"[...] would hound upon morale and others  [...]" → "[...] would hound upon morale, and others [...]"
"[...] perhaps as an experiment they really all ought be rid of raiment and string them [...]" → "[...] may this experiment behove they really all ought be rid of raiment and strung [...]"
"[...] it seemed to them all that any dialogue would already be stopped [...]" → "[...] it seemed to them all that any dialogue had already been stopped [...]"
"[...] to the window, pushing away its curtains; to the lamp, touching its base." → "[...] towards the window, pushing away its curtains; towards the lamp, touching its base."
"[...] where ought the conversation be directed [...]" → "[...] where the conversation ought to be directed [...]"
“[...] there's we've met nobody else.” → “[...] we've met nobody else.”
"[...] she turned to Aluhruna, who at once [...]" → "[...] She was pointing at Tsui as she turned to Aluhruna, who at once [...]"
"[...] “… I thought you didn’t want to discuss it,” Tsui remarked [...]" → "[...] “… The hall you again are mentioning, I thought you didn’t want to discuss it,” Tsui remarked [...]"
8.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
“[...] She was seized by the others, latched apart, so disassembled she could not touch her own body nor her own nails to the bones of her hand [...]” → “[...] She was seized by the others in latch apart where disassembly would not permit she touch her own body nor her own nails to the bones of her hand [...]”
“[...] thrown and would beat us back inside our rooms; we’d never have time or the benefit enabling we alone explain ourselves. That’s a simple scenario, but any solo objective [...]” → “[...] thrown, would have us beaten back inside our rooms, then he’d do what? We’d never have time nor the benefit enabling we alone explain ourselves. We would, for worse assault, be targeted. This place, the politeness of its hosts, don’t you trust in any; a fucking monster would always try to rape us as he pleases. Being already discovered in such a simple scenario means any solo objective [...]”
“[...] and above was situated a chandelier with burning candles.” → “[...] and above, a chandelier with burning candles.”
“Weakness had benumbed each desire in rampage flayed across unto the far steps of a passageway effecting no sensation to route her wounded limbs along, nor any assurance her daze or bile could ever project another illness coaxing the measures of emaciative space with its figures, if any truly remained in thought, thus descended the fever professing her emptied as they failed their destination [...]” → “Weakness had benumbed each desire in rampage flayed across the far steps of a passageway effecting no sensation to coax her wounded limbs along, nor any measure her illness and bile could ever project the emaciative space by its figures, if any truly remained in her daze — thus had descended the fever, professing her emptied as they failed their destination [...]”
5.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
“[...] her companions with greater study. Tsui’s appearance gave rise to some hypotheses.” → “[...] them with greater study.”
“Me? I’m from a village in China.” → “Me? I’m from a village in the Central Country.” Seeing her companion’s brisk pointed squint, she continued, “It’s called what by you— China, I think—”
3.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
“[...] engrave its manifestations as livery and naught else upon the naked half [...]" → "[...] engrave its manifestations as livery upon the naked half [...]"
“[...] dredging a sculpture of its superficiality [...]" → "[...] dredging a sculpturess of her superficiality [...]"
"No, the outcome will be even worse: we would be obliterated until we are naught more than a fucking vestige. There would be nothing left of the Samantha that was, how would there be if we are to consider the depression of her anatomy, if we are to consider the licentiousness of her vaunt?" → "No, the outcome will be even worse: we would be obliterated until the wreathe of our crudities scarce amounts to a fucking vestige for the Samantha that was; how would there be anything left if we are to consider the depression of her anatomy, if we are to consider the licentiousness of her vaunt?"
“[...] lesser still for itself [...]" → "[...] itself lesser still [...]"
"[...] for a structure is fraudulent in impunity by its own solitude, asseverating naught, knowing only simplicities. The same indulgence I tender to my many selves constructs a permutation where all external lies in clandestinity — do this with me until a figure is formed due our piety to one another [...]" → "[...] for a structure is fraudulent in its own solitude by impunity, asseverating naught, knowing it must only subsume regalia as it be woven. The same indulgence I tender to my many selves constructs a permutation where all external lies in clandestinity — do this with me until a figure is formed due our rapture towards one another [...]"
2.3.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
“And you want to leave, just like I do?” she wrought by her own fancy, [...]" → "And you want to leave, just like I do?”, [...]"
22.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] managed to lift it up from the floor [...]" → "[...] managed to lift it from the floor [...]"
Ch. 2
"Samantha giggled amidst [...]" → "Samantha giggled again amidst [...]"
20.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] and leaning forward, she gazed motionless at Tsui." → "[...] and after leaning forward, gazed motionless at Tsui."
"[...] we both met a woman, Maria [...]" → "[...] that woman Maria only we met [...]"
"Oh, I'm well alright speaking nothing [...]" → "You, don't worry, I'm well alright speaking nothing [...]"
"Thedischland, my people [...]" → "þéodrīce, my people [...]"
"East of the Rīnaz [...]" → "East of the Rīn [...]"
"[...] while Tsui had continued forth [...]" → “[...] while Tsui had paced forth [...]"
"Don’t you continue, Samantha [...]" → “Don’t you keep talking, Samantha [...]"
"Samantha did not say anything in response, and by this extent, only sought their voices in wait [...]" → "Samantha did not say anything more and sought only their voices pursue her along [...]"
"Am I vile for having pursued it, then?" → “Am I vile for wanting it, then?"
"[...] surged with pain so severe  [...]" → “[...] surged with pain so intense [...]"
"As time elapsed even further and her face was wiped dry [...]" → “As time elapsed even further and she wiped dry her face [...]"
"As Tsui called out to continue and Aluhruna handed her coat back, they all took upon the frets of a hasting stance and Samantha found her mind alert." → “Tsui called out to resume. Aluhruna handed back the coat, and they all took upon the frets of a hasting stance as Samantha found her mind alert."
"[...] yet amidst these tremors [...]" → “[...] yet against these tremors [...]"
"Weakness had hindered the destination uncovered ere approached the junction, but relentless did they enclose upon this final section as they turned right." → “Weakness had benumbed each desire in rampage flayed across unto the far steps of a passageway effecting no sensation to route her wounded limbs along, nor any assurance her daze or bile could ever project another illness coaxing the measures of emaciative space with its figures, if any truly remained in thought, thus descended the fever professing her emptied as they failed their destination; but she knew they still ran, could but only believe: they had deigned never to relent, not her nor Tsui nor Aluhruna, so uncovered the final traversal for the obscenities of their vomit."
"[...] could not understand her within the passageway [...]" → “[...] could not understand her within the passage [...]"
"[...] the winds howled with great whirling velocities [...]" → “[...] the winds howled in a great whirling vortex [...]"
18.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] by choice prior of make; she runs [...]" → "[...] by choice prior of make? She runs [...]"
Ch. 2
"[...] vigour that coursed [...]" → "[...] vigour coursing [...]
"[...] blood, had a vein not taken meridian of its burdens to encumber the dichotomy due heart’s infinitude would throb by adjunct [...]" → "[...] blood; had a vein not taken meridian of its burdens to encumber the dichotomy due heart’s infinitude would it throb by adjunct [...]"
"[...] threading through her hesitation, was conscious of trifles rebounding and rebounding ceaselessly for action without, where no harm would ever subside, thus with another fading breath discarded all thought however prominent the very foundation to reason herself bared, and forced her fingers past their ensuing trembles. She discovered a mass scattering of lacerations had traced her ankles down to her feet. Each minute haul in observation [...]" → "[...] threading through her hesitation, was conscious of trifles rebounding and rebounding ceaselessly for action without, where no harm would ever subside, thus with another fading breath discarded all thought however prominent the very folly to reason herself bared, and forced her fingers past their ensuing trembles. She discovered a mass scattering of lacerations had traced her ankles down to her feet. Each minute haul subjecting she observe [...]"
"Her head bowed slightly in this warmth, thus she concealed her face outright with her legs as she cradled her figure close, without care for anything else, holding none of her body’s pain to mind. Her breath was of no steadiness as she wept." → "Her head bowed slightly in this warmth. She concealed her face with her legs and cradled her figure close without care for anything else, holding none of her body’s pain to mind. Her breath was of no steadiness as she wept."
"Jaunts I never before once knew are also followed[...]" → "Jaunts I’d never before once known are also alike followed[...]"
"[...] she felt warm tears upon her face; her chest broke and she felt the wounds of her feet tear open [...]" → "[...] she felt warm tears upon her face as her chest broke and she felt the wounds of her feet tear open [...]"
"[...] Samantha coughed and choked as she wiped her eyes with clumsy shivers, and as she did so, forced herself to recall the very room from which they had proceeded, cast her sorrows alongside the other women however dispirited in inclination, was surmounted thus of all agony, and saw they suffered greater turmoil than she; now wept alone for the weakness of her fingers foisted to writhe in her wretched unwillingness as frightfully the noise swelled, so whirled her head about and conceived contorted masses there in the dim light set soon to chase, that her figure fell upon tremors, and she sought the faces of her dear companions again, desperate to sing and clutch their palms soever they each would have festered; yet by this essence withal drowned thither the prospect away, found she might even relinquish her hand from Tsui’s to take nothing of their current endeavour but impedance clinging by delusions again of lamentable make, all debris of pathetic make — she cursed herself more to be wounded, shedding blood in the worth of her contribution, and have her flesh cut open; were she to deteriorate with the total hoist attributed to her rotten steps along the path and collapse behind the others, there would remain proclamation for a victory [...]" → "[...] Samantha coughed and choked as she wiped her eyes with clumsy shivers, forcing herself to recall the very room from which they had proceeded, cast her sorrows alongside the other women however dispirited in inclination and saw they suffered greater turmoil than she; now wept alone for the weakness of her fingers foisted to writhe in her wretched unwillingness as frightfully the noise swelled; so whirled her head about, conceiving contorted masses there in the dim light set soon to chase that her figure fell upon tremors; she sought the faces of her dear companions again, desperate to sing and clutch their palms soever they each would have festered; yet by this essence withal drowned thither the prospect away in cognizance she might even relinquish her hand from Tsui’s to take nothing of their current endeavour but impedance clinging by delusions again of lamentable make, all debris of pathetic make — she cursed herself more to bleed in the sweet worth a casualty could ever contribute, have her flesh cut open; were she to deteriorate with the total hoist attributed to her rotten steps along the path and collapse behind the others would a victory still be proclaimed [...]"
"[...] misery shall all waste past screaming." → "[...] misery would all waste past screaming."
"[...] by what manner of sensation and burden of aggrievance she could force down on the metal floor with her hands." → "[...] by what manner of force and burden of aggrievance she could strike down on the metal floor with her hands."
"[...] formation, bracing herself with the closest wall; Aluhruna [...]" → "[...] formation bracing herself with the closest wall, Aluhruna [...]"
"[...] infirmity from the other elements [...]" → "[...] exhaustion from the other elements [...]"
"[...] frightened for the conclusion of such tortured sojourners [...]" → "[...] frightened for the rape of such tortured sojourners [...]"
"[...] fits own decomposition, heaving [...]" → "[...] its own decomposition heaving [...]"
"[...] before splitting apart [...]" → "[...] before these split apart [...]"
"[...] sewn through with ribbons, hooked together at the behest of our amalgamation, that vile amalgamation!" → "[...] hooked through together with ribbons sewn at the behest of our amalgamation, that vile amalgamation!"
16.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
Yeah, I'm not gonna list these

2.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] soft colds [...]" → "[...] a soft chill [...]
"[...] and there removed from embers [...]" → "[...]; and thereafter, removed from embers,[...]
"[...] whomever might caress [...]" → "[...] whoever might caress [...]
"[...] choice erst of make [...]" → "[...] choice prior of make [...]
1.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] took so long [...]" → "[...] took ages [...]
"[...] rest a bit longer [...]" → "[...] rest a bit more [...]
"[...] observe anything further [...]" → "[...] observe anything [...]
"In compensation [...]" → "For compensation [...]
"[...] by the fire out of discomfort reading, but it [...]" → "[...] by the fire, but it [...]
"[...] she even spun around in full ostentation [...]" → "[...] even spun around peremptory [...]
 
29.1.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] urge her astride [...]" → "[...] urge her aside [...]
"[...] move aside [...]" → "[...] move [...]
 
28.1.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] had a proselyte’s creatures once been vilified are now capsulate by this dignity among sovereign’s rampage, conquests for conquests more for wretchedness would accomplish great ventures through hearts of hollows soever morose by comitative mainstay hence: come perennity, whither embellished of grand siren dispersion — enrapture us not with these little myths and embers alone [...]" → "[...] had a proselyte been erstwhile vilified would see her creatures capsulate by this dignity among sovereign rampage, conquests for conquests more for wretchedness, would accomplish great ventures through hearts of hollows soever morose by comitative mainstay hence: come perennity, whither embellished of grand siren dispersion — enrapture us not with these little myths, these little embers alone [...]"