20.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
"[...] and leaning forward, she gazed motionless at Tsui." → "[...] and after leaning forward, gazed motionless at Tsui."
"[...] we both met a woman, Maria [...]" → "[...] that woman Maria only we met [...]"
"Oh, I'm well alright speaking nothing [...]" → "You, don't worry, I'm well alright speaking nothing [...]"
"Thedischland, my people [...]" → "þéodrīce, my people [...]"
"East of the Rīnaz [...]" → "East of the Rīn [...]"
"[...] while Tsui had continued forth [...]" → “[...] while Tsui had paced forth [...]"
"Don’t you continue, Samantha [...]" → “Don’t you keep talking, Samantha [...]"
"Samantha did not say anything in response, and by this extent, only sought their voices in wait [...]" → "Samantha did not say anything more and sought only their voices pursue her along [...]"
"Am I vile for having pursued it, then?" → “Am I vile for wanting it, then?"
"[...] surged with pain so severe  [...]" → “[...] surged with pain so intense [...]"
"As time elapsed even further and her face was wiped dry [...]" → “As time elapsed even further and she wiped dry her face [...]"
"As Tsui called out to continue and Aluhruna handed her coat back, they all took upon the frets of a hasting stance and Samantha found her mind alert." → “Tsui called out to resume. Aluhruna handed back the coat, and they all took upon the frets of a hasting stance as Samantha found her mind alert."
"[...] yet amidst these tremors [...]" → “[...] yet against these tremors [...]"
"Weakness had hindered the destination uncovered ere approached the junction, but relentless did they enclose upon this final section as they turned right." → “Weakness had benumbed each desire in rampage flayed across unto the far steps of a passageway effecting no sensation to route her wounded limbs along, nor any assurance her daze or bile could ever project another illness coaxing the measures of emaciative space with its figures, if any truly remained in thought, thus descended the fever professing her emptied as they failed their destination; but she knew they still ran, could but only believe: they had deigned never to relent, not her nor Tsui nor Aluhruna, so uncovered the final traversal for the obscenities of their vomit."
"[...] could not understand her within the passageway [...]" → “[...] could not understand her within the passage [...]"
"[...] the winds howled with great whirling velocities [...]" → “[...] the winds howled in a great whirling vortex [...]"
18.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] by choice prior of make; she runs [...]" → "[...] by choice prior of make? She runs [...]"
Ch. 2
"[...] vigour that coursed [...]" → "[...] vigour coursing [...]
"[...] blood, had a vein not taken meridian of its burdens to encumber the dichotomy due heart’s infinitude would throb by adjunct [...]" → "[...] blood; had a vein not taken meridian of its burdens to encumber the dichotomy due heart’s infinitude would it throb by adjunct [...]"
"[...] threading through her hesitation, was conscious of trifles rebounding and rebounding ceaselessly for action without, where no harm would ever subside, thus with another fading breath discarded all thought however prominent the very foundation to reason herself bared, and forced her fingers past their ensuing trembles. She discovered a mass scattering of lacerations had traced her ankles down to her feet. Each minute haul in observation [...]" → "[...] threading through her hesitation, was conscious of trifles rebounding and rebounding ceaselessly for action without, where no harm would ever subside, thus with another fading breath discarded all thought however prominent the very folly to reason herself bared, and forced her fingers past their ensuing trembles. She discovered a mass scattering of lacerations had traced her ankles down to her feet. Each minute haul subjecting she observe [...]"
"Her head bowed slightly in this warmth, thus she concealed her face outright with her legs as she cradled her figure close, without care for anything else, holding none of her body’s pain to mind. Her breath was of no steadiness as she wept." → "Her head bowed slightly in this warmth. She concealed her face with her legs and cradled her figure close without care for anything else, holding none of her body’s pain to mind. Her breath was of no steadiness as she wept."
"Jaunts I never before once knew are also followed[...]" → "Jaunts I’d never before once known are also alike followed[...]"
"[...] she felt warm tears upon her face; her chest broke and she felt the wounds of her feet tear open [...]" → "[...] she felt warm tears upon her face as her chest broke and she felt the wounds of her feet tear open [...]"
"[...] Samantha coughed and choked as she wiped her eyes with clumsy shivers, and as she did so, forced herself to recall the very room from which they had proceeded, cast her sorrows alongside the other women however dispirited in inclination, was surmounted thus of all agony, and saw they suffered greater turmoil than she; now wept alone for the weakness of her fingers foisted to writhe in her wretched unwillingness as frightfully the noise swelled, so whirled her head about and conceived contorted masses there in the dim light set soon to chase, that her figure fell upon tremors, and she sought the faces of her dear companions again, desperate to sing and clutch their palms soever they each would have festered; yet by this essence withal drowned thither the prospect away, found she might even relinquish her hand from Tsui’s to take nothing of their current endeavour but impedance clinging by delusions again of lamentable make, all debris of pathetic make — she cursed herself more to be wounded, shedding blood in the worth of her contribution, and have her flesh cut open; were she to deteriorate with the total hoist attributed to her rotten steps along the path and collapse behind the others, there would remain proclamation for a victory [...]" → "[...] Samantha coughed and choked as she wiped her eyes with clumsy shivers, forcing herself to recall the very room from which they had proceeded, cast her sorrows alongside the other women however dispirited in inclination and saw they suffered greater turmoil than she; now wept alone for the weakness of her fingers foisted to writhe in her wretched unwillingness as frightfully the noise swelled; so whirled her head about, conceiving contorted masses there in the dim light set soon to chase that her figure fell upon tremors; she sought the faces of her dear companions again, desperate to sing and clutch their palms soever they each would have festered; yet by this essence withal drowned thither the prospect away in cognizance she might even relinquish her hand from Tsui’s to take nothing of their current endeavour but impedance clinging by delusions again of lamentable make, all debris of pathetic make — she cursed herself more to bleed in the sweet worth a casualty could ever contribute, have her flesh cut open; were she to deteriorate with the total hoist attributed to her rotten steps along the path and collapse behind the others would a victory still be proclaimed [...]"
"[...] misery shall all waste past screaming." → "[...] misery would all waste past screaming."
"[...] by what manner of sensation and burden of aggrievance she could force down on the metal floor with her hands." → "[...] by what manner of force and burden of aggrievance she could strike down on the metal floor with her hands."
"[...] formation, bracing herself with the closest wall; Aluhruna [...]" → "[...] formation bracing herself with the closest wall, Aluhruna [...]"
"[...] infirmity from the other elements [...]" → "[...] exhaustion from the other elements [...]"
"[...] frightened for the conclusion of such tortured sojourners [...]" → "[...] frightened for the rape of such tortured sojourners [...]"
"[...] fits own decomposition, heaving [...]" → "[...] its own decomposition heaving [...]"
"[...] before splitting apart [...]" → "[...] before these split apart [...]"
"[...] sewn through with ribbons, hooked together at the behest of our amalgamation, that vile amalgamation!" → "[...] hooked through together with ribbons sewn at the behest of our amalgamation, that vile amalgamation!"
16.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 2
Yeah, I'm not gonna list these

2.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] soft colds [...]" → "[...] a soft chill [...]
"[...] and there removed from embers [...]" → "[...]; and thereafter, removed from embers,[...]
"[...] whomever might caress [...]" → "[...] whoever might caress [...]
"[...] choice erst of make [...]" → "[...] choice prior of make [...]
1.2.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] took so long [...]" → "[...] took ages [...]
"[...] rest a bit longer [...]" → "[...] rest a bit more [...]
"[...] observe anything further [...]" → "[...] observe anything [...]
"In compensation [...]" → "For compensation [...]
"[...] by the fire out of discomfort reading, but it [...]" → "[...] by the fire, but it [...]
"[...] she even spun around in full ostentation [...]" → "[...] even spun around peremptory [...]
 
29.1.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] urge her astride [...]" → "[...] urge her aside [...]
"[...] move aside [...]" → "[...] move [...]
 
28.1.26
For Our Rains Shall Be Held

Ch. 1
"[...] had a proselyte’s creatures once been vilified are now capsulate by this dignity among sovereign’s rampage, conquests for conquests more for wretchedness would accomplish great ventures through hearts of hollows soever morose by comitative mainstay hence: come perennity, whither embellished of grand siren dispersion — enrapture us not with these little myths and embers alone [...]" → "[...] had a proselyte been erstwhile vilified would see her creatures capsulate by this dignity among sovereign rampage, conquests for conquests more for wretchedness, would accomplish great ventures through hearts of hollows soever morose by comitative mainstay hence: come perennity, whither embellished of grand siren dispersion — enrapture us not with these little myths, these little embers alone [...]"